This week we have been asked to create poems like Haiku, Rhyme, riddle, and Shape and I did a shape poem and it is about a guy hearing unfamiliar music in the distance. here is my poem please read across -->.
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, September 2, 2021
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Ka pai Sid, I really respect the fact that you decided to have a go at the shape poem, not a lot of people did and it's actually harder than you think, so well done. I can tell that you really like music, is it something that has been helping you get through lockdown?
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